年中考英語作文押題及滿分作文示例
【來源:易教網 更新時間:2026-04-27】
一、假如你是李華,你的外國朋友Tom要到中國來,他想了解中國的風俗習慣,請你寫一篇短文向他介紹中國的風俗習慣。包括:表達問候,與人就餐,參加聚會等。
注意:
1.詞數80左右;
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;
3.開頭結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear that you’ll come to China. You said you wanted to learn about the customs in China. Now, let me tell you something about them. China is a country with a long history,____________________
When in Rome, do as the Romans do. And you’ll have a great time in China.
范文:
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear that you’ll come to China. You said you wanted to learn about the customs in China. Now, let me tell you something about them.
China is a country with a long history and there are many customs in China. Now let me introduce some to you.
When you meet friends, you should greet each other and just say “hello”, instead of shaking hands frequently. When you eat at a friend’s home, you should use your right hand to hold chopsticks. It is best not to make noise when eating. It’s polite to eat all the food in your bowl. Don’t knock bowls or plates with chopsticks. This is impolite. After dinner, the host usually makes tea for the guests. When you leave, you should say goodbye to the host politely. If your friends invite you to the party, you’d better arrive a little earlier, 5 to 10 minutes in advance. You can bring a small gift to your friends. But your friends won’t open presents immediately. This is different from other foreign countries.
When in Rome, do as the Romans do. If you obey these, I think you’ll have a great time in China.
【詳解】1. 題干解讀:題目要求根據提示要點,介紹中國的一些風俗習慣,可以適當的發揮,寫作時要運用正確的英語表達,要選用恰當的詞匯和短語。
2. 寫作指導:寫作時要與已給出的開頭和結尾融合起來,本文應該用第二人稱來介紹內容;時態采用一般現在時,提出建議可以多用情態動詞;在介紹內容時,力求語言準確,內容完整,保證行文連貫,條理清晰。
二、假如你是李華,你發現有些父母在該陪伴孩子的時候,卻選擇沉迷于手機。請你根據下面的內容提示,寫一篇短文,談談對這種現象的看法。內容要點如下;
1. 家長花大多時間玩手機以至于不關注孩子;
2. 家長應該為孩子樹立榜樣,少玩手機;
3. 家長可以有更多空閑時間陪伴孩子:
4. 良好的溝通可以加強親子關系,有利于孩子的成長;
5. 補充一兩點有關信息或想法。
注意:
1. 文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱;
2. 詞數:60-80;
3. 內容連貫,不要逐條翻譯;
4. 開頭已給出,不計人總詞數。
參考詞匯:accompany v陪伴 strengthen v. 加強 do good to有益于
Today, many parents spend a lot of time playing games and seeing movies on their smartphones. ________
范文:
Today, many parents spend a lot of time playing games and seeing movies on their smartphones. They pay less or even no attention to their kids. I think parents should set good examples for their children, so they should shut their phones off or spend less time on them. If so, parents will have more spare time to accompany their children and do lots of things with their children, like playing games, watching movies or playing sports, which can provide good chances to communicate with their children. Good communication can not only help strengthen parent-child relationship but also help children’s development.
All in all, parents should use the smartphones in a good way and care more about their children’s life.

【詳解】1. 題干解讀:題目要求寫一篇關于父母沉迷于手機而不關注孩子的英文短文,要求包含給出的要點并補充一兩點有關信息或想法。
2.寫作指導:寫作時,時態應用一般現在時,人稱綜合采用第三人稱和第一人稱。文章按照題目所給思路展開即可,最后補充一兩點相關信息或作者的想法。文章應做到層次分明、條理清晰、不要出現單詞拼寫及語法時態方面的錯誤。
三、人的一生要面臨各種各樣的選擇,選擇的方向正確,努力才有意義。所以,我們在面臨選擇時,要客觀理性地分析。請以“A choice that I made”為題,并根據以下要點和要求,用英語寫一篇短文。
1.要點:(1)你做出了什么選擇;
(2)你是怎樣做出選擇的;
(3)它給你帶來怎樣的影響和變化;
2.要求:
(1)文中不得出現真實的人名和校名
(2)詞數100左右
范文: A choice I made
There is no doubt that it is important for us to make reasonable choices in life.
Last year. I fell in love with volleyball. Then I chose to be a member of the school volleyball club. However, my parents wanted me to spend more time on schoolwork. I had a long talk with them calmly. After that, I trained hard in the club. Meanwhile, I reviewed my schoolwork as long as I finished training. To my joy, I got satisfying results not only in the matches but also in the tests.
All in all, no matter what the choice is, if it is reasonable, just make it to follow your heart. Only in this way can it bring out the best in you.
【詳解】1.題干解讀:該題目屬于材料作文寫作;要求我們從“我做出的選擇”這個主題出發,并聯系實際,發表自己的觀點。
2.寫作指導:本文應該用第一人稱來敘述;時態采用一般過去時為主;結合實際,根據表達需要適當發揮,使文章內容更加充實、完整,但需要注意合理性,要緊貼題目要求和文章主旨;應從句子的整體結構出發,以簡單句結構為基礎,穿插并列句、復合句以及其他復合結構的使用,提升作文檔次。
同時語句之間使用恰當的連接成分,使行文連貫、自然。
四、良好的運動習慣是生活的重要組成部分。請你根據以下內容要點提示,以“Sports Make Me Strong and Energetic”為題,寫一篇短文,可以適當發揮。
1)每天早晨6: 30按時起床,運動半小時,晚飯后運動一小時左右;
2)騎自行車或步行上下學;
3)主動上體育課,積極參加課外活動;
4)身體強健精力充沛,保持運動習慣。
要求: 開頭部分已給出,不計入總詞數;內容合理,要點齊全,句子及篇章結構正確連貫,書寫規范;不得出現姓名校名等個人信息。
Sports Make Me Strong and Energetic
Everybody, men or women, young or old, should have a good habit of doing sports. As teenagers, we should play sports often.______________________________
范文:
Sports Make Me Strong and Energetic
Everybody, men or women, young or old, should have a good habit of doing sports. As teenagers, we should play sports often.
In the morning, I usually get up at 6:30 on time, and do morning exercises for half an hour. After breakfast, I ride or walk to school, which is also a kind of exercise. In the school, I take an active part in PE. Sometimes we play football or volleyball, and sometimes we play basketball, table tennis or badminton. Football is my favorite sport. I also take part in some after-class activities. I have never been absent from them. In the evening after supper, I often take a walk along the street near my house for an hour either with my parents or with my friends.
I like sports, which makes me healthy, strong and energetic. So I often get the first prize in the school sports meeting. I will keep the good habit all my life.
【詳解】1.題干解讀:該題目屬于記敘文寫作。第二段應包含內容要點提示中的前3點,都是關于“我”平時具體的運動習慣;第三段綜述運動的優點,并得出結論我們應該保持運動習慣,呼應文章主題。

2.寫作指導:根據文章的標題可知,本文應該用第一人稱來寫作;根據內容要點提示可知,時態采用一般現在時為主。
五、初中三年,或興奮,或失落,一切過往,皆為序章。畢業之際,學校將舉辦以“Sharing”為主題的演講活動。請根據下面的要點提示,寫一篇演講稿:
1.分享心情:高興、激動、不舍;
2.分享心得:在學習、人際交往、克服困難方面的心得;
3.分享未來:暑假安排、未來目標。
注意:
1、文中不能出現真實的地名、校名、人名等信息;2、詞數在80-100之間,已給出的文字不計入總詞數。
Sharing
Good morning, my dear teachers and friends! It is my great honor to make a speech here. I will graduate from my school soon. _____________________________________
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening!
范文:
Sharing
Good morning, my dear teachers and friends! It is my great honor to make a speech here. I will graduate from my school soon. It’s hard to say farewell to all of you.
During the past three years, I realize that we should take study seriously. For myself, I always work hard in class. I listen to teachers carefully and take notes. I finish homework on time. My classmates often help with my schoolwork. With their help, I overcome lots of difficulties and become much better. I want to say thank you to all the people who have helped me.
This summer holiday, I plan to visit my grandparents in another city. And in the future, I’ll keep on studying hard and stick to my dream. I will never give up on my new journey.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening!
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材:本文是一篇說明文,為演講稿;
②時態:時態為“一般現在時和一般將來時”;
③提示:寫作要點已給出,考生應注意不要遺漏,適當增加細節完整表述內容。
[寫作步驟]
第一步,開頭已給出,引出本文主題;
第二步,介紹過去三年在學習、人際交往、克服困難方面的心得;
第三步,分享暑假安排、未來目標。
[亮點詞匯]
①take note記筆記
②on time按時
③keep on doing sth繼續做某事
④give up放棄
![[高分句型]](http://www.nmpta.com/photo/d1/b/b5/10/763792.jpg)
[高分句型]
①It’s hard to say farewell to all of you.
(動詞不定式作主語)
②I want to say thank you to all the people who have helped me.(who引導定語從句)
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